Interesting...
I can easily say that this is the perfect picture for the story it was based upon.
Although it may be a little bit confusing for those who haven't read the description FIRST. I don't know maybe it's just me.
And I'm no expert, but the transitions between scenes could be a little more flowing I guess. Other than that, astonishing visuals and perfect detail. This flash animation really caught the image of the story. Great Job!